Evan Burl lives in a world of darkness and fear. He and his fellow orphans work until exhaustion for a heartless benefactor. While trying to survive and waking up to the world outside the orphanage, Even starts to realize not everything is what it seems.
The Good: An idea unlike I have read thus far, with elements of magic, suspense, and family ties that bind. I enjoyed the characters, and the all-around feel of building enchantment.
The Bad: I did not appreciate how often the author jumps in time sequence. Also, there are too many unanswered questions upon conclusion of this first installment. One needs a bit more resolution to continue reading the series.
Overall I think this is a good read. There are typically growing pains with any new series, and I think there are wonderful opportunities for this story. Happy reading!
Hey, thanks for the review! You might consider checking out a new version that was uploaded with a new ending at http://evanburl.com/download I'd love to know what you think. Might resolve some of the issues you had with it :) Email me at evan@evanburl.com
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